Nah it isn’t that too much is going on. I feel that my ears need something dynamic to follow, but the section isn’t dynamic enough. for example, there is a synth pad on a slow crescendo, and it might be my speakers but I don’t think it’s prevalent enough, and it might not start early enough.

There just has to be a more prevalent element sort of “leading the charge” during those 8 bars. I hope that makes sense?

sorry for the long delay

I like the flow of the track, nice job! My only note is the section at 0:50. I might try to improve that. Otherwise i was pumped to hear how good this was.

I’ve never heard the original but your remix did hold me captive, and i could easily imagine myself vibing to it if I wasn’t so tired right now lol

all good things come to an end